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		<title>By: Untitled - First Chord (notes). &#171; do something pretty while you can&#8230;</title>
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		<dc:creator>Untitled - First Chord (notes). &#171; do something pretty while you can&#8230;</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 Jul 2008 22:08:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] a (strange) respect for the fact that these are (largely) the exact words I used at the time. The conversation series I spoke of attempting between my sixteen-year-old and current selvese seems stalled, largely [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] a (strange) respect for the fact that these are (largely) the exact words I used at the time. The conversation series I spoke of attempting between my sixteen-year-old and current selvese seems stalled, largely [...]</p>
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		<title>By: gosling</title>
		<link>http://gosling.wordpress.com/2008/07/07/sixteen-notes/#comment-642</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Jul 2008 20:52:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love that someone is actually interested in this stuff.  :)

I do write differently, actually, based on whether it&#039;s a spoken-word poem or not.  I tend to write the s-w pieces in fragments, which I weave together later, and I often write those fragments (or large portions of them) in my head, reciting them aloud to remember them, instead of writing via a notebook or computer.  The other pieces I tend to sit down with more, and I have a bit better plan ahead of time of what I want them to be; (they&#039;re also a *little* more likely to look at the end like what I expected, in the beginning, I&#039;d be writing.)  So I would actually say I focus more on structure, at least in the prewriting stage (to whatever extent I have a &quot;prewriting&quot; stage), in the non-sw-poems, although I try very hard to make sure there is a structure in the s-w poems, as I revise them.  

And I&#039;m kind of all about how things sound regardless of the (sub-) genre, although that&#039;s less evident in the project I was working on for a class recently because the prof who was guiding me is a huge opponent of interesting sounds.  I&#039;m hoping I can shirk that particular piece of his influence soon.  :)

And now I have to go track down some of your poetry; you have me curious.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love that someone is actually interested in this stuff.  <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>I do write differently, actually, based on whether it&#8217;s a spoken-word poem or not.  I tend to write the s-w pieces in fragments, which I weave together later, and I often write those fragments (or large portions of them) in my head, reciting them aloud to remember them, instead of writing via a notebook or computer.  The other pieces I tend to sit down with more, and I have a bit better plan ahead of time of what I want them to be; (they&#8217;re also a *little* more likely to look at the end like what I expected, in the beginning, I&#8217;d be writing.)  So I would actually say I focus more on structure, at least in the prewriting stage (to whatever extent I have a &#8220;prewriting&#8221; stage), in the non-sw-poems, although I try very hard to make sure there is a structure in the s-w poems, as I revise them.  </p>
<p>And I&#8217;m kind of all about how things sound regardless of the (sub-) genre, although that&#8217;s less evident in the project I was working on for a class recently because the prof who was guiding me is a huge opponent of interesting sounds.  I&#8217;m hoping I can shirk that particular piece of his influence soon.  <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>And now I have to go track down some of your poetry; you have me curious.</p>
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		<title>By: leftoverkumquats</title>
		<link>http://gosling.wordpress.com/2008/07/07/sixteen-notes/#comment-636</link>
		<dc:creator>leftoverkumquats</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Jul 2008 22:21:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ohk. So one more pick-your-brain-question: do you go into writing a spoken word poem any different than you would a regular poem? (Focus more on structure for spoken, etc?) I find I focus more on strong imagery and interesting sounds. Then i go back and reluctantly cull hard to say phrases.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ohk. So one more pick-your-brain-question: do you go into writing a spoken word poem any different than you would a regular poem? (Focus more on structure for spoken, etc?) I find I focus more on strong imagery and interesting sounds. Then i go back and reluctantly cull hard to say phrases.</p>
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		<title>By: gosling</title>
		<link>http://gosling.wordpress.com/2008/07/07/sixteen-notes/#comment-625</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Jul 2008 04:59:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think it could be an interesting project.  And I suspect The Therapist will be pleased.  :)

Actually, the majority of the pieces aren&#039;t spoken-word.  The only ones included here that I think of as spoken-word are the ones that have videos.  (With the exception of &quot;Sixteen&quot; which I haven&#039;t recorded yet.)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think it could be an interesting project.  And I suspect The Therapist will be pleased.  <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Actually, the majority of the pieces aren&#8217;t spoken-word.  The only ones included here that I think of as spoken-word are the ones that have videos.  (With the exception of &#8220;Sixteen&#8221; which I haven&#8217;t recorded yet.)</p>
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		<title>By: leftoverkumquats</title>
		<link>http://gosling.wordpress.com/2008/07/07/sixteen-notes/#comment-621</link>
		<dc:creator>leftoverkumquats</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Jul 2008 04:36:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>* I like the idea behind this project. It will be interesting to see how much of the present-you is infused with what you channel as past-you.
* Are the majority of your pieces on this site transcribed spoken word? (Why do you only video some of your poems?)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>* I like the idea behind this project. It will be interesting to see how much of the present-you is infused with what you channel as past-you.<br />
* Are the majority of your pieces on this site transcribed spoken word? (Why do you only video some of your poems?)</p>
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